Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Bed

Warm and welcoming blankets on a mattress;
a cloud so easily accessible.
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5 comments:

  1. Holly LamFebruary 5, 2013 at 6:13 PM

    I really like the metaphor you created. A warm bed is a cloud that you can touch.

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  2. ALEXISFebruary 5, 2013 at 7:43 PM

    I agree with Holly.
    The metaphor you used works perfectly.
    I feel the same way about my bed(:

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  3. ShelbyFebruary 6, 2013 at 7:55 PM

    Makes me want to jump straight into bed! I agree with both Alexis and Holly, that's a great methaphor.

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  4. WendyFebruary 7, 2013 at 4:24 AM

    I wish my bed felt this way! You've got the idea: metaphor, particularly likening something unnatural to something natural.

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  5. Mikayla MFebruary 7, 2013 at 8:50 AM

    Thank you everyone!

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