Sunday, February 3, 2013

Sestina

Being out in the sunshine
with toes dipped in the water,
the ocean breeze on your back,
and working on your tan.
You could be strolling along the board walk,
or looking at the bright city lights at night.

When you're out at night
avoiding the sunshine
and out on a walk,
you can walk along the water
in the sand colored a beautiful tan,
with the city lights at your back.

To your home you can start to head back
to be tucked away for the rest of the night.
In your dreams, your mind wanders back to that sand so tan,
and the feel of your warm back bathed in sunshine.
Again, your dreams draw you back to the salty water
and again, you walk.

And the next day, you walk.
You walk back,
back to the water,
day or night,
rain or sunshine,
you walk back to that sand, so soft and tan.

And sometimes you leave the sand, so tan.
And through the beautiful city you walk.
The day is majestic with the sunshine
on your back.
And on goes the night
in the city along the water.

And in the city along the water,
with the sand a beautiful tan,
couples hold hands as they stroll at night
window-shopping at Pier 39 and listening to the seals by the board walk.
and before it gets too late, they head back
to get home to bed to wake up again to the sunshine.

But I stand alone by the water on the board walk.
I don't care about my tan or the wind at my back.
Or the nights spent by myself--I'm here for the sunshine.



Written with San Francisco, California, on my mind :)

4 comments:

  1. It has a nice flow to it. I like how you us the different meaning that your words have. For example with tan; you use it to describe skin and as the color of the sand, or walk; you use it as an action and as an object (boardwalk).

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  2. This is my favorite one so far!!
    I like the descriptions and the topic.
    Good job(:

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  3. This is lovely. It's sort of a perpetual action (kind of like Groundhogs Day, the film with Bill Murray, in which he keeps waking up to the same day and repeating it)--a repeated action that seems pleasurable. I've not been to San Francisco, yet this makes me want to be there. :)

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